Saraya versus Lulu

This pic took a while to do, and it's going into my portfolio. Image is of Saraya versus one of my new characters 'Lulu'. Have to thank ~greatestanimeartist0 for the 'assassin vs. assassin' idea, because I couldn't think of anything.

Anyway, being that you don't know about Lulu, I'll give ya some basic info: name is Lucy 'Lulu' Loon, assassin ranked 8 out of 10, 23 years old, uses yo-yo's to do battle, and her favorite yo-yo's are Cotton Candy and Bubblegum (the ones above).

This is what Saraya gets for wandering around an abandoned subway station. I need to do more art with her...

Anyway critiques welcome.

Saraya, Lulu (c) me